Preliminary task 1
Brainstorm
Overall
plan /Plot
Villain walks down a
brightly lit hallway, followed by bodyguards. Villain stops outside a double
set of doors, with one bodyguard on either side. Villain slowly opens door
revealing a dark room with a captive bound to a pole. Villain rips duct tape
off of captive’s mouth with a painful ‘rip’, and proceeds to interrogate
captive. Captive replies in ignorance. Villain exits room in silhouette
signalling for his bodyguards to enter (to kill captive). Scene ends with shot
of captive desperately trying to break free.
Updated Version:
Villain drives up on a motorbike, hops off and walks up to a closed garage door. Villain bangs on door and it opens up manually from his' body guards who positioned inside the garage. Villain walks down a crowded hallway in silhouette. Scene changes to a dark, red lit, room with a captive bound to pole. The villain crouches down, and threatens captive, interrogating him. Captive responds. Villain signals for bodyguards to enter, exiting the scene. Bodyguards unbind captive and vigorously walk away with captive struggling in their arms.
Updated Version:
Villain drives up on a motorbike, hops off and walks up to a closed garage door. Villain bangs on door and it opens up manually from his' body guards who positioned inside the garage. Villain walks down a crowded hallway in silhouette. Scene changes to a dark, red lit, room with a captive bound to pole. The villain crouches down, and threatens captive, interrogating him. Captive responds. Villain signals for bodyguards to enter, exiting the scene. Bodyguards unbind captive and vigorously walk away with captive struggling in their arms.
Story
Board
Talent/actors
Villain- Josh Campbell
Bodyguard 1- Theo Payn
Bodyguard 2- Nicholas
Farrow
Captive- Oscar Ironside
Updated:
Villain- Theo Payn
Bodyguard 1- Nicholas Farrow
Bodyguard 2- Zach Parratt
Captive- Oscar Ironside
Updated:
Villain- Theo Payn
Bodyguard 1- Nicholas Farrow
Bodyguard 2- Zach Parratt
Captive- Oscar Ironside
Location
We had hoped to film
inside and ajar to the multi-purpose room. However, due to the unwanted
diegetic music that would be over heard from the dance room next door, as well
as the chatter and visual disturbance of parents along the adjacent hallway, we
decided to shift our location to a garage and car park.
Shot
list
Costumes
and props
I was first to jump up
at the opportunity to organise costumes! I love the importance it has as part
of mise-en-scene to create verisimilitude. In our skit, we have four characters
that need costumes:
- Business man
(villain).
Ø I picture this
character in a full black suit, (shirt, suit jacket, dress pants/jeans) and
black dress shoes, to signify his status and power in the film. The black also
indicates the characters malicious motives. This high class, villain is a key stereotype and suggests the evil that monetary power is often associated with.This high end character also challenges the idea that crimes committed by the wealthy, are overlooked and accepted because of their power and ability to pay their way out of criminal, or socially unaccepted situations. This This role is played by Theo Payn.
I can source a suit jacket, and he will most likely be wearing dress shoes and
jeans. This is the look I have planned:
- Body guards (villain
associates/assistances)
Ø These two characters
are basically mirrors of each other. They move at the same time, in the same
direction. They have no speaking role in the film, but are used to emphasise
the power of the villain (the business man). I envision them fully decked in
tight black casual clothes, the casual look states to the audience that they are of lower status than the villain who holds superiority in the film. The black uniform will show their lack of individuality under the villains peremptory rule. it will also show their association with evil. The tightness of their clothes will parallel to the tight reign of power that the villain has. These characters challenge the idea of those communities/ countries in society who have been forced to follow leaders every command without challenging concepts, and regulations and who have no freedom of speech. It will also evoke the audience to question the responsibility of people associated with 'evil deeds' or socially unacceptable practices, who themselves aren't committing injustice but who follow the lead of those who do. I
will ask the talents if they have their own black top and to bring it in. The
black shoes and pants will be easily sourced, as part of the senior high boy’s
school uniform (black dress pants and shoes). This is the sort of idea I image:
- Captive (tied to a
pole).
Ø The captive is a
character who has been denied all pride and dignity. I imagine the captive
dressed in tatters, to mirror the state of his inner turmoil (due to his
captivity). I thought we would leave him bare chested, maybe even add some dirt and red whip marks/ scratches using tomato sause/lipstick. For the pants I will source
denim mid length shorts. The captive will be wearing bare feet. This stereotypical helpless character challenges gender roles, here the girl is the 'damsel in distress'. This character represents those who are 'bound up' with obstacles they could not prevent, whose circumstances bind their personal happiness. or perhaps those who have been treated with prejudiced against superior class, and who have experienced social injustices.The iconography of the red scratch marks represents the hardships suffered by these unfairly treated citizens. I imagine him to
look somewhat like this:
Other props:
- Dirt ( Ill bring in)- Iconography, symbolising the hardships of lower class citizens
- Red lipstick (Ill bring in) -Iconography, symbolising the pains inflicted on the lower class from the higher, more privilege classes.
Lighting
plan
Filming
Day operations
• Equipment final check- Addison Saxby
• Audio Operator- Gilmark Manyere
• Lighting/ Flecky- Ella Ironside (me)
• Camera Operator- Addison Saxby
• Location shot setup- Gilmark Manyere
• Director / Time keeper- Ella Ironside
(me)
• Actors- Addison Saxby
Equipment
list
• Camera
• Camera bag
• Camera stand
• Batteries + Battery charger
• Duct tape
• Chair
• Flecky
• Lights (X3)
• Lighting stands
• Red cellophane
• Rope
• White shirt ripped
• Denim shorts
• Black fitted shirt (X2)
• Black suit jacket
Conventions
-Antagonist wears
cloths of a dull/ dark colour pallet
Ø This renders to the
audience a notion that the antagonist has skew and dismal motives. The smart, business suit in our case, will
also hint that the antagonist holds power and status in this film.
-Low key lighting
Ø This gives the scene an
element of suspense. If the audience’s view is party hindered by the dark of
the surroundings, the audience: 1- can’t attain much visual context about the
scene and 2- they will feel a scene of unease or uncertainty, which
subsequently leads to suspense.
Ø Our scene starts off in
a well-lit hallway and progresses into a dark room with dim, red light. The
equilibrium of light in the beginning of the scene is therefore broken as the
dark room is entered. I’m hoping the change in lighting will also instil
suspense.
-Low angled shots
Ø In shot four (viewed on
storyboard), we are shooting at a low angle looking up at the antagonist. This
shows the audience who holds power and domination in the scene.
Ø To contrast these low angled shots, we are planning to shoot a high angled shot of the protagonist
struggling to break out of captive at the end of the scene. Being ‘looked down
upon’ emphasises the issue that the protagonist has no control over his
situation.
-Contrast of shot
duration
Ø A slow tracking shot
initiates our scene. This placid camera movement directly contrasts the quick
shot that follows, (an extreme close up of hand gripping door). Then again a
slow mid shot, (antagonist opening door) followed by a quick shot (revealing
protagonist who is bond). These contrasting shots give a jerky stop start
motion, which again adds unease and suspense.
-Heightened diegetic
sound
Ø I would like to include
the sound the door creaking. The heightened noise of the door will in turn
elevate the dramatic effect on the audience. It also involves us in the story
and creates verisimilitude.
-Slow eerie music
Ø I would like to add
eerie music as the protagonist walks down the hallway starting the scene.
Uneasy music has the power to play with the audiences emotions and put them on
edge.
-Close/ extreme close
ups
Ø Reveal the emotions of
the protagonist, helping the audience to feel for and sympathise with him. This
makes it even more disconcerting when the protagonist is in danger, or in our
case, struggling to break free before the bodyguards come in to eliminate him.
-Hand held camera
Ø During the time at the
end of our film, the camera is hand held at a high angle pointing down at our
captive protagonist as he is trying to break free. This ‘wobbly’, unsteady
camera angle mirrors the unease and distress of the protagonist.
- Red hue lighting
Ø We are planning to a
use a red hue on our lighting when filming in the dark auditorium. The purpose
of this is to emphasis the danger our protagonist is in.
Principals
of continuity
-180o rule
Ø In our film we have incorporated
he 180o rule. First off as the antagonist walks on the camera tracks him from
left to right. As the camera tracks down the hallway with the protagonist, we
will make sure it does not rotate more than 180o. The camera angle then jumps
to a still shot of the protagonist in the middle of the frame, the 180o rule is
not broken even though the position of the camera has moved.
Ø Again, when the camera
focusses on the antagonist for the first time, we catch a quick glimpse of him
from the side, then again from the front. This 90o turn of camera direction does
not break the 180o rue, yet it does give the audience a purposeful sense of
disorientation.
-Match on action
Ø The first shot of the
protagonist walking down the hallway, is then followed by a still shot of him
with his bodyguards on either side, outside a set of double doors. This is the
first match on action. We don’t experience the bodyguards splitting and positioning
themselves on either side of the protagonist, yet the audience can still grasp
want has happened.
Ø The second time we see
a match on action is when the protagonist is slowly opening the door. Later the
protagonist appears in the dark room. The audience should register that the
protagonist had walked into the room after he opened the door, without actually
having to watch him walk into the room.
Ø Another time, we see a
shot of the antagonist followed by a shot of the protagonist storming of the
room in silhouette. Even though the audience doesn’t see the protagonist turn
around to exit, we can fill in the gaps pretty easily.
-Shot reverse shot
Ø There are two main
moments of shot reverse shot in our scene. Firstly, we receive a close up of
the captive/antagonist followed by an over the shoulder shot of the protagonist
ripping the duct tape off the antagonist. The focus has quickly changed between
the antagonist to protagonist (shot reverse shot).
Ø Again, we see a shot reverse shot reverse shot of the captive, responding to the protagonist’s unruly investigation. This focus changes between characters, depending on who’s talking.
Hi Ella
ReplyDeleteOverall Score: 15/20
Comments: This planning seems very well thought-out and structured in an easy to understand format. I like that you included visuals to create a moodpboard sort of feel to give us an insight into how you envision your film to look. You were also able to demonstrate your understanding of the continuity principles in your planning which is promising. You seem to have also put a lot of thought into the conventions you are choosing to include which show an understanding of how the elements of a thriller come together to create suspense and tension.
I would love to have seen a slightly more in-depth look at the symbolism, stereotyping and significance of the costumes and props you chose to include. From the colour to the style of the costumes, to the props themselves, what do each of these choices signify? How will they add meaning to the film? What iconography have you chosen to include, if any? You have done a satisfactory job of explaining the costumes and listing the props, I feel you could have expanded on your rationale behind your choice just slightly and related this back to the thriller genre.
The only terminology that seems confused is your idea of low angle and high angle. A shot looking down at your actor would be a high angle shot because it's taken from a higher angle. A shot looking up from the ground at your character is a low angle shot, because of the placement of the camera.
Overall a well planned effort and I look forward to seeing the finished product!
Homework RE-DO
ReplyDeleteWell done Ella. You have put a lot of time and effort into demonstrating your understanding of concepts in creating a thriller film sequence.
Overall Amended Score: 17/20